The Art of Pitching: How to Get Investors Excited About Your Idea

Pitch like a pro: master narrative-led fundraising with UK-specific tips to turn investor meetings into belief-building stories.

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July 9, 2025

The best pitches don’t tell investors why your startup is promising — they show them, through story.

Yet many UK founders still treat storytelling as a luxury. Something fluffy and optional. A rhetorical flourish for the end of the deck, after the graphs and TAM slides.

In reality, it’s your sharpest tool for conviction-building.

In a fragmented and competitive funding landscape, data is abundant — but belief is scarce. Stories turn facts into feeling, and that’s what investors act on. When you learn to frame your pitch like a narrative, you're no longer just explaining your business. You’re inviting investors into a journey they can believe in.

If you want to go beyond slides and stats — and into belief and buy-in — this is where you start.

Why Your Pitch Needs to Tell a Story

Investors aren’t robots running due diligence scripts (although you'd be forgiven for thinking many VCs want to present themselves this way). They’re human beings making judgement calls under uncertainty. When you pitch, you’re not just sharing numbers — you’re offering them a story they can champion.

Yvette Lamidey, Co-founder of Milton Keynes based Angel Network, Central Arc Angels explains:

"At Central Arc Angels, we always encourage founders to lead with their story. It draws people in, builds credibility, and helps investors understand your ‘why’. Humans are wired to remember stories— and when woven into your pitch, they make your message stick."

There’s science behind this. Neuroscience shows that stories activate both emotional and decision-making centres in the brain. Where raw data engages logic, stories engage memory, empathy, and trust. This matters — especially in pre-seed and seed rounds, where belief often precedes proof.

As Kathryn E. Strachan, founder of CopyHouse and author of Scaling Success, puts it:

“Humans naturally gravitate towards stories as it’s how we build connections and relationships. While we’d like to think all business decisions are rational, there’s a lot of evidence that suggests otherwise. Being able to tap into emotions and connect with your investors, to truly inspire them, requires great storytelling.”

We see this clearly on ThatRound. Story-first pitches — especially those with a strong founder narrative or clearly articulated ‘why now’ — get more engagement on our platform. Angels and syndicates, in particular, respond to context, motivation, and momentum. The right story opens more doors than the perfect spreadsheet.

Practise Like a Performer, Not a Presenter

Storytelling isn't just about what you say — it's how you deliver it. The best founders don’t present their startup like a school project; they perform it like a stage act.

Oren Jacob, ex-CTO of Pixar and founder of a startup himself, frames pitching as live performance. You need versions for every setting — a one-minute pitch for serendipitous encounters, a ten-minute pitch for pitch days, and a thirty-minute version for investor meetings. These aren’t just shorter or longer versions of the same thing. Each is a distinct narrative format with its own rhythm and emphasis.

Jacob also offer some excellent pitch rehearsal techniques:

  • Interruption drills: practise fielding questions out of order. Be ready to jump from vision to go-to-market without skipping a beat.
  • Mirror talk: rehearse aloud, record yourself, and trim every bloated sentence (this can lead to feelings of doubt, and a degree of ‘cringe’, but it does help create a superior performance).
  • “Projector bulb’s blown” drills: deliver the pitch without slides. If your story still holds, you’ve nailed it.

This preparation isn’t overkill. It’s what allows you to adapt in the room, to read investors, and to stay grounded in your narrative even when the conversation twists.

The Fundraising Narrative Arc

A great pitch mirrors the classic three-act structure of storytelling. It creates context, builds tension, and resolves with a vision.

Act 1: Why Now, Why You

Begin by situating your startup in time. What’s changed in the world that makes this opportunity urgent? This is your “timing thesis” — show investors that you’re not just building something useful, but something timely.

Then anchor the story in your own journey. Why are you uniquely qualified to tackle this problem? Founder-market fit isn’t just about skills. It’s about obsession, credibility, and personal stake.

Act 2: The Problem and the Transformation

This is the emotional heart of your story. But don’t just drop stats and market sizing. Give the problem a face. Introduce us to the person who’s struggling — make it vivid, specific, human.

Then show us the transformation. What changes when your solution exists? Not just what your product does, but what it enables. This is where investors start to believe.

Act 3: Momentum and Vision

Your traction is the plot twist. “We believed X, we tested Y, and here’s what happened.” Investors want to see not just a product, but a hypothesis validated.

Your vision isn’t your five-year forecast. It’s a glimpse of the world if you win. Show what your market looks like once your solution becomes standard. Make them want to be part of building that future.

For a deeper dive on structuring this arc, First Round’s storytelling guide is a must-read: Tell Stories Like This.

Mastering Investor Dynamics in the Room

Great founders don’t just tell stories. They adapt them.

When you're in the room, your job is to read curiosity and respond without derailing your narrative. Build your pitch structure with flexibility in mind:

  • Start with a tight 20-minute talk track
  • Hold 60 minutes’ worth of detail in your back pocket
  • Structure your deck as narrative nodes, not linear steps—so you can jump between traction, team, and go-to-market based on the conversation

In the UK market, cultural nuances matter. Avoid razzle-dazzle. Don’t chase American-style bravado. Instead, let your confidence come through substance and sincerity.

The Most Powerful Slide is You

Investors ultimately invest in people. The team slide is often where they decide whether they believe in you, so it’s a fitting point in your presentation to land Act 1 of your story arc.

The UK investment scene values ambition but is allergic to arrogance. Your story needs to balance vision with realism. UK investors are increasingly global in outlook, but still culturally attuned to modesty, clarity, and pragmatism.

Your job isn’t to project perfection. It’s to show depth. Grit. Obsession.

Avoid over-engineering your pitch with Silicon Valley-style hyperbole. Instead, articulate a big opportunity with grounded execution, your story must show you’re deeply committed to solving a real problem.

Your Pitch Is Just the Beginning

Think of your pitch not as a final exam, but as the opening chapter in a longer story arc. Your goal isn’t to close the deal in the room — it’s to earn the next conversation. The best pitches don’t chase a cheque; they set the stage for belief, trust, and continued dialogue.

To get there, structure your deck like a narrative. Use a storyboard to shape your arc — beginning, tension, transformation, and vision — not a checklist of bullet points. Speak with clarity and conviction, never reading from slides. Let your words carry the story, and let the visuals support, not overshadow it.

Equip yourself with short, sharp, human-scale anecdotes to bring data to life. Anticipate tough questions and answer them with real stories. And end not with a forecast, but with a “future scene” — a vision of the world when your product wins.

Founders who pitch like protagonists — driven, clear, obsessed — don’t just get polite nods. They get follow-ups. And in a fragmented, high-friction fundraising landscape, that second meeting makes the difference.

And as with any great story, practice makes perfect.

References

1. Tell Stories Like This to Take Your Fundraising Pitch from Mediocre to Memorable | First Round Review - https://review.firstround.com/tell-stories-like-this-to-take-your-fundraising-pitch-from-mediocre-to-memorable